Hi Year 7! I was very impressed by how well you worked as response partners last week and gave each other feedback on the first draft of your writing. You gave me some excellent feedback on mine too and you showed you understand what it means to be a ‘critical friend’ in order to help somebody to think about how to improve their work.
I am looking forward to reading your redrafts of you language autobiographies. If for some reason you did not manage to hand it in today, please email it to me at mlindsay@nautical.lambeth.sch.uk or give me a copy in tomorrow’s lesson or bring it in on a memory stick. I can’t wait to read them!
Ms Lindsay